Thesis:
Given that there was already poverty in Haiti, when the earthquake hit it caused even more poverty due to the unstable government, unemployment, and growing population.
Topic Sentence:
There was a record of unstable government in Haiti even before the earthquake hit which made the catastrophe even more hectic and difficult, which ultimately led to poverty.
A. Disorganization regarding health and hospitals
B. Disorganization regarding safety and crimes
C. International affairs (which sometimes help more than their own government)
Topic Sentence: Because of the unemployment and lack of education, Haitians were driven into poverty and hunger.
A. Tough decisions to be made
B. Schooling system
C. Everyday life (how poverty, hunger, and the Gov. are all connected- one big issue)
Topic Sentence: The growing population in Haiti made everything harder because the amount of people dominated the amount of land, jobs, and resources available in Haiti.
A. It's a problem that is harder to control (along with all of the other issues)
B. Environment (humans and the environment sustain each other)
C. People do have hope
Thesis statement (restated): Before the earthquake in Haiti occurred, there was a dysfunctional government, a lack of jobs, and an overpopulation, and these dilemmas only continued to expand once the earthquake struck.
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